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My 35 years
I remember walking on dusty village roads following sunset drowning behind mountains where no trees
I remember walking tiny roads of my tiny village which didn’t have name and I am watching the skinny sheep’s and goats guarded by skinny herders holding tiny sticks
I do remember the beautiful girls on the village water wells holding their clay made water tanks with smiles
I still see my village in debris only hear her screams and crying but not seeing her no more
The dark sky has covered the clouds and I see no sun I see no moon lights
The years have gone by me without noticing either my body or my soul
I am walking toward my village seeing no herders and no animals
I am lost in digital war with no name IP’s and transformed broadcasts in virtual chaos
I am fighting against transistors now and losing in battle to my own creations to robots that I have built
I miss my village with her tulips and greens while watching animal grass browsing
I define my identity of scans and uploads of e-me
I feel no more human but light that combined with protons and neutrons
My screams has turned into machine war where no feelings but codes
My feelings can’t be answered by the programs and virtual scripts
I am scare now by our own virtual reality that has jailed us all in our own world
What have we done from version one to six!
While I was happy with my village girl’s hennas but not tattoos now we all are marked with barcodes on our bodies
My 35 years has fooled me by digitized I and no wake ups now or maybe later
I was not happy with a necklace but now we are forced to carry a chip in our wrists
I see my childhood running on free lands laughing with my friends
I remember now carrying water from my village well to farm workers while holding my pant with the other hand
I remember those days while have no clue of germanium nor silicon that combines a killer semiconductors
I am looking at my mountains where the dawn starts and now I remember my small village with 60 houses where no codes, silicones or IP’s
Now I remember my screams in my nightmares where I have transformed to another world and got lost in time layers
My childhood laughs holds me and my dreams while running around animals of my village
I remember when my father holds me in air and mom watched me and smiled at me
I remember my two dogs spot and blackhead running after me
Now I realize that I am all part of an open source program where coders have created me from all around globe
My body built by millions of coders talking different but using same program
I am all lost in my 64 bit semi human android that covered with titanium body without heart
Now I know I never had a village with dusty road, no mountains either or village water well
It was all a program…
My 35 years was all made of codes and now it is all falling into air without power and no e-me anymore!
I am made of 35 billions of codes…I wasn’t even existed in a world of human but a machine world
All I hear now is my childhood laughs that fade outs under my village debris
All I feel is Bad commands or file names and syntax errors in me now........
System halted __
Written by Errol Oz
www.ErrolOz.com
I remember walking tiny roads of my tiny village which didn’t have name and I am watching the skinny sheep’s and goats guarded by skinny herders holding tiny sticks
I do remember the beautiful girls on the village water wells holding their clay made water tanks with smiles
I still see my village in debris only hear her screams and crying but not seeing her no more
The dark sky has covered the clouds and I see no sun I see no moon lights
The years have gone by me without noticing either my body or my soul
I am walking toward my village seeing no herders and no animals
I am lost in digital war with no name IP’s and transformed broadcasts in virtual chaos
I am fighting against transistors now and losing in battle to my own creations to robots that I have built
I miss my village with her tulips and greens while watching animal grass browsing
I define my identity of scans and uploads of e-me
I feel no more human but light that combined with protons and neutrons
My screams has turned into machine war where no feelings but codes
My feelings can’t be answered by the programs and virtual scripts
I am scare now by our own virtual reality that has jailed us all in our own world
What have we done from version one to six!
While I was happy with my village girl’s hennas but not tattoos now we all are marked with barcodes on our bodies
My 35 years has fooled me by digitized I and no wake ups now or maybe later
I was not happy with a necklace but now we are forced to carry a chip in our wrists
I see my childhood running on free lands laughing with my friends
I remember now carrying water from my village well to farm workers while holding my pant with the other hand
I remember those days while have no clue of germanium nor silicon that combines a killer semiconductors
I am looking at my mountains where the dawn starts and now I remember my small village with 60 houses where no codes, silicones or IP’s
Now I remember my screams in my nightmares where I have transformed to another world and got lost in time layers
My childhood laughs holds me and my dreams while running around animals of my village
I remember when my father holds me in air and mom watched me and smiled at me
I remember my two dogs spot and blackhead running after me
Now I realize that I am all part of an open source program where coders have created me from all around globe
My body built by millions of coders talking different but using same program
I am all lost in my 64 bit semi human android that covered with titanium body without heart
Now I know I never had a village with dusty road, no mountains either or village water well
It was all a program…
My 35 years was all made of codes and now it is all falling into air without power and no e-me anymore!
I am made of 35 billions of codes…I wasn’t even existed in a world of human but a machine world
All I hear now is my childhood laughs that fade outs under my village debris
All I feel is Bad commands or file names and syntax errors in me now........
System halted __
Written by Errol Oz
www.ErrolOz.com
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Permalink Reply by www.ErrolOz.com on -
Hi Angel,
Thanks! and I am glad you liked it :-)
Errol Oz
errol@OzGroup.org
www.OzGroup.org
angelsfall2 said:Wow ....reading this I can't help but think of my existance before I knew of the ciber word. How simple things seemed when I could actually touch and feel my surroundings..now so much is said and done on these black keys that I peak at its slightly sad. What a cold peice of metal I spend my time with while wishing I was acually with the one I see on my screen. Fighting daily to keep this thing under my finger tips active and running, losing the battle more then half the time as the machine wins. Some day hoping to join the real world once again, Hummm got to plan a vaction and leave the machine at home but you know, I would probably be wondering what kind of messages I am missing while out smelling the roses..lol. Good write .....Errol Oz....made me think, made me remember. Lynn -
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Are you joking when you called her this...my word cause if you weren't then I am closing down from here, she's a friend of mine and I don't think she caught this and if she did and you guys are joking around I still think you're out of line. After all how well do you know someone to be calling them names...joking or not I am thinking you're a snot! You should at least apologize even if you're not joking, "bitch" is a rather strong word! To hear you call her that; well it's just absurd. Hey! I am not kidding here in this lair, I will tell everyone I know about your intelligence in this site..."I swear!"
I don't rightly know if I like you! humf! To you!
Brian Allossery said:You dumb bitch put some of your art up now--- -
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Permalink Reply by Brian Allossery on -
A misunderstanding in cyberspace! So sorry-
That comment was made from myself to Errol and intended as a joke between friends-
I guess I should have added an interpretation for the general public- alas=
Not sure how it was misconstrued but we have removed it at any rate-
Poetry on people!
Noden said:Are you joking when you called her this...my word cause if you weren't then I am closing down from here, she's a friend of mine and I don't think she caught this and if she did and you guys are joking around I still think you're out of line. After all how well do you know someone to be calling them names...joking or not I am thinking you're a snot! You should at least apologize even if you're not joking, "bitch" is a rather strong word! To hear you call her that; well it's just absurd. Hey! I am not kidding here in this lair, I will tell everyone I know about your intelligence in this site..."I swear!"
I don't rightly know if I like you! humf! To you!
Brian Allossery said:You dumb bitch put some of your art up now--- -
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Cool- Poetry On!
Bill Mauler said:I thought it was something stupid like that the dates were far apart to be related. Thanks for straightening that out Brian and thank you noden for being a good friend to me and angelsfall2 MAWH (just so theres no misunderstanding that kiss was not to you Brain lol)
Brian Allossery said:A misunderstanding in cyberspace! So sorry-
That comment was made from myself to Errol and intended as a joke between friends-
I guess I should have added an interpretation for the general public- alas=
Not sure how it was misconstrued but we have removed it at any rate-
Poetry on people!
Noden said:Are you joking when you called her this...my word cause if you weren't then I am closing down from here, she's a friend of mine and I don't think she caught this and if she did and you guys are joking around I still think you're out of line. After all how well do you know someone to be calling them names...joking or not I am thinking you're a snot! You should at least apologize even if you're not joking, "bitch" is a rather strong word! To hear you call her that; well it's just absurd. Hey! I am not kidding here in this lair, I will tell everyone I know about your intelligence in this site..."I swear!"
I don't rightly know if I like you! humf! To you!
Brian Allossery said:You dumb bitch put some of your art up now--- -
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