Poetry

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Comment by Bill Mauler on February 20, 2010 at 7:49pm

Melanie had a good idea last time i was through. Lets start a tag poem about SRING since i'm sick of the cold and snow.

Comment by Bobby Z on January 8, 2010 at 11:24am

bobby z publishes many strange poems on his page posted as blogs since he didnt know how to post here.oops (computer illiterate)

Comment by Bobby Z on January 8, 2010 at 11:16am

i would like to comment on terri dimatteo's sad young angst heavy poem. its cool it rhymes, the trauma of youth i remember with heaviness. wish they had self -help books back then. or even i wish therapy were more trendy back then.

Comment by Brian Allossery on November 27, 2009 at 4:06am

Not sure what it means but is amusing to read-

Kind of confuses me but inspires me too........

Comment by Terr Di Matteo on November 26, 2009 at 6:42pm

I wrote this poem a while ago and i would love someone's opinion on it!

My mind was made up, or so it seemed that way

That I would finally go through with it that very same day

I thought it through with care, contemplating now and again

The final move to make, the last one till the end

The only thing I needed, the only thing not present

Was something to distract the world, those utter filthy peasants

The time was almost near, the hour coming quicker

But something held me back, something flashing like a flicker

My life blinking before me and all I had achieved,

Perhaps somewhere down the line I think I was deceived

If only I had something to remove all of the feeling

My final act of duty would be easy and appealing

Once again I find myself in that undermind situation

With an undecided mind and a hate for contemplation